Thursday, May 14, 2009

Query format, yes or no?

When I follow your query format, I lose a real
marketing hook for my novel, i.e., that there are
three women who kill pedophiles and not just
one, although I definitely have a protagonist
and she has two Nemeses, one of whom
is her own husband.
The query format, which works (like magic) includes a three-sentence opening paragraph that tells the goal and obstacle (s) for the protagonist, and gives a "tease" solution, thereby motivating the agent to keep reading. Learn to write this paragraph so it contains the essence of the plot. It's good practice. Then, by all means, give it your own twist, as long as the basic elements are there.
For example, here's a one-sentence query opener that works:
A pre-teen girl lands in a foreign country, kills
a stranger, steals her shoes, hooks up with
three misfits who help her kill and steal again
to get what she wants.
(The story? Hint! Her yappy dog is named Toto.)

3 comments:

  1. Hi Molli.

    I like your wand. (And your new blog.)

    Cheers!
    Jean

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  2. Is a query letter for editors written in the same format as one for agents? Just wondering . . . .

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  3. I've heard that you should include a paragraph (possibly the opening of your novel) from your manuscript so that the agent gets a quick look at how you write? Is this a good practice?

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